This is looking great benj. I love how youve thought about Ives building as a hanging (tension) structure. You probably dont need the cable elements below Ive as its taking away from that suspendedness and neutralises the beauty of your bridge. Main mast structure; think about it more dramatically, something that "bends" towards one side like the masts shown in the tutorial blog and in the lecture.
Gaga office space looks very "plonked" on; think about how you can integrate/link/draw/connect the ribbons on her side into a space instead. As you have talked about throughout the assignment, shes draining power away from ive. (Look at your T shape "influence," things being clothed over)
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ReplyDeleteThis is looking great benj. I love how youve thought about Ives building as a hanging (tension) structure. You probably dont need the cable elements below Ive as its taking away from that suspendedness and neutralises the beauty of your bridge. Main mast structure; think about it more dramatically, something that "bends" towards one side like the masts shown in the tutorial blog and in the lecture.
ReplyDeleteGaga office space looks very "plonked" on; think about how you can integrate/link/draw/connect the ribbons on her side into a space instead. As you have talked about throughout the assignment, shes draining power away from ive. (Look at your T shape "influence," things being clothed over)
great dancing structure
ReplyDeleteJacky: Thanks a lot for the comments! Will make changes
ReplyDeleteZhiMingLei: Thanks! Had trouble understanding your sketchup model, but you've put it in Crysis - will comment